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Lego House

Lego House

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Posts: 797

I sit here think what if,

What if I stopped them,

What if it never happened,

I cannot forget,

I cannot forget,

It destroys my mind,

It destroys my life,

I just wish it never happened,

I tried taking my life,

The one that aint worth living anymore,

Just to be with them,

That crash,

It ended it all,

I cannot bare it anymore,

Tears come down like razor blades,

It hurts, I cannot escape,

These thoughts from what happened,

If only, If only,

I didn't cut those brakes.

I'm sorry.

I suppose it's an emotional angry piece of poetry. If you imagine them saying this crying with anger of what they have done then maybe you might see what it's like to have somebodies death on your shoulders. I really had writers block the other day but I think the emotion in this is pretty strong and hopefully gets you thinking, why did she cut the brakes in the first place? Why would she want to be with them if they now know she did it? Maybe it's cause she wants to say sorry for what she did?

Modified 3 times, last modified by Lego House on Fri 27th August, 2010 @ 11:44pm

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Hunter

Hunter

Chuck Norris

Posts: 26297

I think if it were the conscience if you will of someone in that state it might not have been quite coherent.

"Is that the Wizard of Oz? The Wizard will sort it out. It's 'cause of the wonderful things he does."
The Law of Grabbity - I sees it, I grabs it

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Lego House

Lego House

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Posts: 797

What do you mean?

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